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Part 1 of Digital Colouring practice is complete. (I split up my hiatus time, I shall colour 5 linearts.)
I FINALLY FINISHED THIS Asjdskfjdkfjdfkj *dies*
HAVE I IMPROVED?
Please, please, PLEASE critique and if not critique then tell me what you think ;w;
Look at my first tablet drawing which was on my birthday, July 23rd: :thumb327554878:
And now this QwQ
This took about 5-6 hours to colour x___x I re-did the eyes and skin Owo
And used a light source for the first time. I like colouring like this C: It started off as cel shading but I had to blend for the clothes. Which I suck at colouring and really need to practice at. But I enjoyed colouring this anyway~ :'D
EDIT: This is my style of colouring and I haven't dveloped a secure drawing style yet, but it looks like this. So yeah. All the colouring = my style.
My eyes still burn and brain is still dead after this..ugh.... x.x Next time I should try and be quicker
The image is a rather bright and cheerful image! It's incredibly cute and uplifting. Anime style is very common but because of your design it changes it a little. The impact from the picture is great! I like the way you arranged the the bubbles on the background but in my opinion I would of liked the orange to be abit brighter. There's alot of detail on her face (the eyes and blush) which has good affect on the character! The shadows and wrinkles are in the right place. The lighting makes the hair on the right side look slightly dull but I can understand why. Perhaps you could experiment more with lighting in the future: Seeing what happens if instead of making it duller but alot brighter? (Just a suggestion! ^w^) The uniform colour matches and to my surprise goes well with the girls hair! I think you did a wonderful and beautiful job on this piece of work! Keep it up: I shall send you a virtual reality llama since I already sent you one! XD
Things That Are Good How They Are: Vision: It's a beautiful piece, neat, a good blend of colours, very cute, I think this would make just about anyone want to see it!
Originality: It's not very original because the style is anime and is rather common but that makes it no less lovely!
Technique: very good I see nothing out of place as far as the colouring the eyes are detailed and you made the shadows and wrinkles perfect!!
Impact: I saw this in someones favourites and it stood out immediately! I had to look! It's gorgeous, and wonderful and stands out beautifully!
Things That Could Use Some Improvement:
At the neck slight lining coming from the shoulders into the neck short and very slight would be good.
Depending on her age (which looks somewhere from 12-14) she could use a little shading under her breasts just a little because if she's that age they wouldn't be too big, and the right arm could use a little changing I wish I could tell what but it seems just a tiny bit odd.
All in all it's a beautiful picture and I love it very much!!
Vision: It's a beautiful piece, neat, a good blend of colours, very cute, I think this would make just about anyone want to see it!
Originality: It's not very original because the style is anime and is rather common but that makes it no less lovely!
Technique: very good I see nothing out of place as far as the colouring the eyes are detailed and you made the shadows and wrinkles perfect!!
Impact: I saw this in someones favourites and it stood out immediately! I had to look! It's gorgeous, and wonderful and stands out beautifully!
Things That Could Use Some Improvement:
At the neck slight lining coming from the shoulders into the neck short and very slight would be good.
Depending on her age (which looks somewhere from 12-14) she could use a little shading under her breasts just a little because if she's that age they wouldn't be too big, and the right arm could use a little changing I wish I could tell what but it seems just a tiny bit odd.
All in all it's a beautiful picture and I love it very much!!
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